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DAMN YOU, WRITER'S BLOCK!! :shakefist:


YES, I'm bringing back an old favorite of many deviants FULLY REVISED!

I've always loved this picture, but parts of the original (can be viewed here: [link]) really b u g g e d me.


SO THANKS TO ADOBE PHOTOSHOP CS3, I messed around a bit and came up with this! I, personally, think it's better than my first go of the picture. No more border or line going down the middle of the background... and the slight shadow and recoloring that I added makes it feel more like a finished product. Cleaner.
:dance:


I hope you enjoy it!
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~56oreo Apr 23, 2009
Trees were harmed in the making of this photo XD

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LET US PARTAKE IN ENJOYMENT, THIS RHYTHM IS ILL AND I WOULD MOST LIKE TO GALLAVANT UPON YOUR DANCE HALL ROD
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~UntamedXExpression Apr 23, 2009
Unfortunately so, but IT WAS FOR THE GOOD OF THE ARTS!

I hope they understand.
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Photography is a splatter of heart and soul on paper
where the only boundaries are the edges of the sheet.
FEEL FREE TO BE FREE
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~RinOtonashi Sep 20, 2008
It's a nice shot, but it seems like you.. idk, sharpened it too much? .. o_O I can't tell. But yeah(:

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=clindhartsen Aug 26, 2008  Student Interface Designer
Honestly, it's amazing how some somewhat minor, yet major, changes can make a photo have that much more impact. More focus, less distractions, a definite improvement on an already good piece.

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~UntamedXExpression Aug 27, 2008
THANK YOU SO MUCH!! :blushes:

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Photography is a splatter of heart and soul on paper
where the only boundaries are the edges of the sheet.
FEEL FREE TO BE FREE
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=clindhartsen Aug 28, 2008  Student Interface Designer
Not a problem, not a problem at all. It's kind of a reminder how revisiting a past piece can bring something new and amazing.

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~kakashifanal Aug 24, 2008
Nice idea ^^

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A bit of Steve Carell and Patrick Dempsey on the side <3

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~UntamedXExpression Aug 24, 2008
Thank you!! And thanks for the :+fav:!
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Photography is a splatter of heart and soul on paper
where the only boundaries are the edges of the sheet.
FEEL FREE TO BE FREE
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~kakashifanal Aug 27, 2008
No problem ^^

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I <3 Stephen Colbert and Jon Stewart~!
A bit of Steve Carell and Patrick Dempsey on the side <3

"Insomnia is my greatest inspiration. " - Jon Stewart
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~ziekdog42 Jul 12, 2008
Wonderful.

A definite improvement, the tonality of this one is great, no more crazy colors just a solitary sepia-ed look. On that note, I would consider pulling in on the notebook and selectively desaturating that red, it pulls the eyes off focus and out of the image a little too easily.

Anyway, well done, and congratulations on utilizing CS3 (good job with the line removal). :)
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